User:Mike Schwartz/subpage/sandbox2

It worked! See http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=KMS_state&diff=496944332&oldid=488249559

PS:  The edit comment had to be kinda cryptic because there is a Procrustean limit on the number of characters there.

It says:


 * ‎References: use "last2" & "first2" in 2nd   , to correct problem w/the hyper-link (from a     reference) NOT WORKING ((it was a dead link...!))  Note: see KMS_state&diff=next&oldid=480515579 & the next edit of 27-Mar-2012)

but if you want more clarification, the full, more self-explanatory version would say:


 * ‎References: use "last2" and "first2" in the second    template, to correct a problem with the hyper-link (from a     reference) NOT WORKING ((it was a dead link...!))  Note: I think the original problem was introduced in an edit of 13:46, 31 March 2011 -- that is, this edit: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=KMS_state&diff=prev&oldid=421708105 although it was not until a later edit (on 27-Mar-2012) that the    reference, referring to that second    -- that is, [wikitext quote:] "" -- was inserted in the article.

I hope this helps! --Mike Schwartz (talk) 19:39, 10 June 2012 (UTC)