User:Mikedenezza14/Xavier McDaniel/Domtrimbur Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mikedenezza14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Mikedenezza14/Xavier_McDaniel&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Xavier McDaniel

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)