User:Mikenuggets22/Hexa(tert-butoxy)ditungsten(III)/OneMustImagineAGradStudentHappy Peer Review

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Mikenuggets22
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mikenuggets22/Hexa(tert-butoxy)ditungsten(III)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hexa(tert-butoxy)ditungsten(III)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Links to reference articles work fine.

Should the tert- prefix in the second paragraph be italicized since the first instance of tert- in the article was in italics?

Maybe it would be better to separate the second to fifth paragraph into their own section such as synthesis, and leave the lead of the article as only the first paragraph.

In the Reactions > With carbon monoxide section, which article is this from? Also, it might be helpful to have an image of the structure of a complex compound such as W4(μ-CO)2(O-i-Pr)12, I can't easily picture it in my head.

In the Reactions > With alkynes section, it would be helpful to have an image of the structure that makes it an analogue to a dimetallatetrahedrane and also more complicated compounds like [W3(O-t-Bu)5(μ-O)(μ-CEt)O]2.

In the Reactions > With nitriles section, could create a link to Wikipedia article to quinnuclidine so it will be easy to mouse over and see the structure.In the Reactions > With allenes section, what does a v-shaped bridge structure look like?

Overall, covered a wide range of literature and reactions and deep synthesis details. It may just be that I have a hard time picturing some structures, but having images of the more complicated structures would be helpful for a reader.