User:Miketultz6/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article but it provides virtually no information and that is a key component to a good Wikipedia article. Also he is Mayor of Lansing which I have a connection to.

Evaluate the article
Andy Schor's Wikipedia page is the one I will be evaluating. Schor's page lacks any information on where he stands on policy which is a major factor missing from his article. It also gives us little information on his personal life. If someone were coming to this page to learn about Schor, they would leave with little valuable information. More information needs to be included about the things he has done while he has been in political office. There is no information regarding what he has done while in office in the House of Representatives or as Mayor of Lansing. It would also be beneficial to include his stance on major issues, so if someone where wondering whether to vote for him or not the information needed would all be on this page.