User:Mikeyminnow2319/Communication source/LetsTalk2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mikeyminnow2319


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Communication source


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communication source

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you starting off with a definition was really good. The draft so far is missing a good amount of references so as you are looking it over try to add references to your examples. In your lead you kinda get lost and go into a list of examples, as a reader it takes me away from communication source and a lot of those examples could work later in your page. Maybe having a section based on these examples will help. For the "In economy" section try to relate it to something in communication source because it losses it's power and seems misplaced. Right now it seems like you are working on it due to it being so short in length, I don't have much to review but I can tell that you got some strong examples and will have a great page as you work on it.