User:Milan Rosen/Chemical weapon/Aiapicco Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''Your article lacks a little information about the topic as well. You might want to consider adding more references to back up the points you have made already. I noticed that you are adding to the Disposal section on the original wiki page, and you might want to consider adding some information about its effects on land and what it did to the surrounding soil. I also read a little about the original wiki page. I thought maybe you could add more information under the Unitary versus binary weapons and maybe talk about the different effects they have on the environment. Overall the information you present so far is excellent. I can see not too many spelling and grammar mistakes, and all the information is in a neutral tone and relevant to the topic.'''