User:Milan Rosen/Chemical weapon/AwaltonUW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Milan Rosen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Milan%20Rosen/Chemical_weapon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content you've added is very thorough and high quality. The passage is well-written and is easy to read. Can you go into greater depths about where these chemicals came from and how they'll affect the environment? You have a great summary of hte events but there isn't enough information on the risk these chemicals pose to the ocean. Maybe you could discusses a historical case of dumping.

You need to add at least two images. Maybe a map of dumping sites or the crates that were dumped into the ocean.

I saw no spelling or grammar mistakes in your writing.

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