User:Milan Rosen/Chemical weapon/YH4DU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Milan Rosen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Milan%20Rosen/Chemical_weapon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chemical weapon

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello, nice work on information-gathering for your article. I have listed the changes I would make according to each criteria below.

Lead


 * Firstly, can you add the lead to your section, because you have only put two body paragraph. The lead should be concise and overly detailed, where it should provide a concise and not overly detail summary to the article major section.

Content


 * The content is relevant to your topic. However, you used many sources drawing from past years such as 1998, 1997, and 1989. I suggest you to find more current sources on chemical weapons. Also, you can provide more content improvement, such as putting more data to support the statement. For example the phase "chemical weapons dumped in the ocean pose a continual environmental and human health risk", where it would be best provide the number of species and human been affected by it. Also, the content should have more words since it is below the 500 words limit.

Tone


 * Thirdly, the article is present in a neutral tone, where it does not have any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. Also, there are no viewpoint that are overrepresented and underrepresented.

Sources and organization


 * Nice work taking from peer-reviewed sources, where the reliable secondary source of information backs up all the facts in the article. In addition, the article has good grammar, and it provides two paragraphs that clearly shows different point on the topic

Image


 * Make sure you add three images

Overall impression


 * Overall, your content and sources are good and written unbiasedly. I would focus on adding the image and Lead.