User:Milest303/Libido/Moe.abuameer Peer Review

== Hello, and thanks for the very nice topic you discussed. I like how you fit your research in the page and how you detailed all the point so accuratly. I will suggest you to fucus on two or three main point and explain them further. I noticed that there's no exact idea, or topic to focus on. You don't want to be vaguely explaining your topic. Also, try to mention where you have got your statistics from in the duration of the article, like based on a study made by....., this and this and that happened. to make the article looks more legitimate, since your article is more of a scientific article. Other than that I loved reading the article. Good Job ==