User:Millardr3779/Pacing strategies in track and field/Panopit Peer Review

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Millardr3779


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 * Pacing strategies in track and field


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 * Pacing strategies in track and field

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The lead in this article is great. It is a very good lead that clearly describes the article's topic. The content is definitely relevant to the topic as it talks about certain strategies and splits in track and field. I think that this article does deal with an equity gap because it is something that many would not think to write about because of how specific it is. What the author does a great job of is keeping it neutral and just providing certain information that does not show them taking a certain opinion. They use many sources that are credible and the sources are also neutral themselves as they just provide information with no bias. It is well-written and it needs some more added to it but it looks pretty complete. It does not have images right now but I think a couple could be helpful to the article. I believe you just add a bit more information and this article will look great.