User:Millerkm8818/Viral meningitis/RLSbiology Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Millerkm8818


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Millerkm8818/Viral_meningitis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Viral meningitis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see that you have yet to make changes on your article; however, I have some suggestions for when you do begin to edit! Here is a list of my suggestions to improve the article as it exists now:


 * change epidemiological information as it is today - make all info up to date
 * include variations of risk based on
 * gender
 * age
 * race
 * environmental, physical, and mental exposures
 * previous / pre existing health conditions
 * include specific countries with higher rates and possible reasons as to why
 * include graphics of distributions
 * keep information unbiased, concise, and clear for all audiences
 * include reliable references that help frame your work

Once you have begun your revisions on the article, I would be happy to review, asses, and ass suggestions to your revisions.