User:Millie Deroy/Aquamarine (gem)/Wildinnn Peer Review

General info
Millie Deroy
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Millie%20Deroy/Aquamarine_%28gem%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aquamarine (gem)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article gives a fairly good description of what the gem Aquamarine is, what it is used for and where it can be found. The structure is well organized and the article remains neutral throughout. For instance, it does well in organizing each section under a subtitle and is easy for the reader to find which section is most interesting. It also does not try to convince the reader that Aquamarine is a good gem because or a bad gem because, remaining neutral.

The sources for the article are a good variety, some from 2021 and some as old as 2003 and 2005 which could be improved upon.

The information added about the world's largest Aquamarine is great as it gives the reader a good idea about how large Aquamarine can get. The source added from 2022 and 2023 are relevant to the article however the Firefly Guide to Gems from 2003 could be reviewed.

For further information on the gem Aquamarine, it would be good to mention that it is closely related to the popular gem of emerald as it is mainly the color that differs it and more people would recognize the word "emerald". Further information can also be added in the "in culture" section as it briefly mentioned what countries used the for instance, the Japanese used it to make netsuke. However, there is no mention of what the gem is believed to be used for in modern day or is it simply used for jewelry. It would also be good to add more pictures about Aquamarine as the Wikipedia article does not illustrate well the shapes and sizes that Aquamarine can display.