User:Millipede-the-great/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
A Very Potter Sequel

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because it has a C-Class rating. This musical appeals to a somewhat niche fanbase. My preliminary impression of the article was that it is very well written and that the information was relevant, although the synopsis could use some edits.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is very strong. It gives the reader a brief understanding of what the musical itself is about as well as context for its source material and related works. This section could be shortened to include less of the specific details, but it doesn't contain any irrelevant information and does a good job of setting up the remainder of the article.

All of the content in the article is relevant to its topic and up-to-date. Information about this musicals prequel, A Very Potter Musical, could be added to the main section, as it is only mentioned in the lead. This article does not deal with the equity gaps.

The article is written in a neutral tone with a neutral viewpoint. There is no apparent bias or attempt to persuade the reader to any particular position. No viewpoint is under or overrepresented.

All information featured in the article is cited. The sources used are current for when the musical was performed although most are from online news articles. Some of the refence links lead to a completely different page or cannot be found.

This article is well organized and does not have any spelling errors. There are slight grammatical issues and many of the sentences could be rewritten to be more concise and professional.

The only image in this article is for the soundtrack art. It is placed logically, well-captioned, and properly cited. It does not violate copyright guidelines.

The talk page has one conversation on external link modification. An individual had changed a link and was asking for it to be verified. A bot had replied because after February 2018 bots would no longer be monitoring external link modification sections on talk pages. The bot included links to tools for verification of external links.

This articles overall rating is C-Class and does not have a status for importance. It contains a very detailed synopsis and important information about the musicals inception and popularity. Overall it is well-developed and mostly needs edits to create more concise sentences.

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