User:Milo lenox/Brown Girl in the Ring (song)/Isha0323 Peer Review

This was a very good article, however there are some things the author can add to make this article better. I use to play this game and sing the song as a child and it was very important for us to learn the words of the song while playing the game. The author could have add the words of the song so that the readers can learn the song for themselves.The author could add pictures so that the readers could see the formation the children would make while preparing to play the game as instructed by the song "Brown Girl in the Ring". The author could also explain what the song meant to children in the Caribbean. For me personally the song meant happy times but not only that it was a legacy in my family to teach all the kids the songs our grandparents would sing and enjoy as a kid. Finally, the author should have place the origin of song games before talking about the song "Brown Girl in the Ring".Overall, the author did a great job staying neutral throughout the article and explaining the different versions of the song throughout the years.