User:Mimitee123/Human impact on marine life/Egmuehlb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

mimitee123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mimitee123/Human_impact_on_marine_life?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human impact on marine life

Evaluate the drafted changes
Possibly specify what oceans are effected the heaviest. Or maybe which country produces the most waste that ends up in the ocean. About three sentences in, you started a sentence with "because" (I noticed it, might be completely fine but Wikipedia may not allow it). Don't forget to add your citations in your text and add the references at the bottom. It was a very detailed paragraph and I learned a ton of new things.