User:Mimitee123/Human impact on marine life/Mush3099 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mimitee123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mimitee123/Human_impact_on_marine_life?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human impact on marine life

Evaluate the drafted changes
There were no sources included in the draft, so I would try to include some sources. All of the information seemed to be factual and nonbiased and seemed to improve the overall quality of the Wikipedia entry. There should be a cited source for all the fact based claims being made at the end of every 1-2 sentences. The sentence "Because plastics are light, much of this pollution is seen in and around the ocean surface, but plastic trash and particles are now found in most marine and terrestrial habitats, including the deep sea, Great Lakes, coral reefs, beaches, rivers, and estuaries." needs to be fixed in terms of its grammar and punctuation. The sentence shouldn't start with "because" and there should be less commas.