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When reading this article, immediately I was engaged about her being the first person to identify cystic fibrosis and the first American physician to describe the disease. However, once the writer engaged the reader I believe there could have been more detail on her research. Not to give the whole article away in the introductory paragraph, yet, give the reader more of a summary on her research. Going straight into her life story was kind of distracting and from the first time reading this I was expecting more on the research of what Dorothy Hansine Andersen did with cystic fibrosis. Give me more information on what she exactly did and how important it was the she was the first American physician not just the first female physician to describe the disease. Good points were made and the introductory research of Dorthy Hansine Andersen were kept neutral, not perusing the reader in a certain viewpoint. However, the first link did not work and it was the first top one. This should be the one where the most information was found from the source and it did not even show up. Yet, the second link of the National Women's Hall of Fame does prove to be trustworthy and give direct information. After checking all the sources, only the first one did not work. All six of the sources directed the reader to where the information was found. Another good point is that the citation were done correctly and they are considerable reliable references with good backgrounds. There is more information that can be added since this article is just in its beginning stages of editing. I, myself would like to do more research on Dorothy Hansine Anderson. No conversation was found on the talk page. The article was rated as a start-class. A preliminary article with room for improvement. I feel as though, Wikipedia is more blunt and straight forward with the information and in our class we talk more about the underlying meaning of information or facts about different people. I like when there is more detail and given opinion if both sides are given.

Topic Chosen: Dorothy Hansine Andersen I have selected Dorothy Hansine Andersen as my topic of choice and I would like to contribute more information on her research and experimentation on cystic fibrosis because I feel that this is very important. I will contribute more into her personal life being the first American physician to describe the disease and not just as a woman.

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Dorothy Hansine Andersen
Dorothy Hansine Andersen (May 15,1901 – March 3,1963) was an American pathologist and pediatrician who was the first person to identify cystic fibrosis and the first American physician to describe the disease.

Early Life
Born in Asheville, North Carolina, Andersen was the only child of Hans Peter Andersen and Mary Louise Mason. Hans Peter Andersen died in 1914 when Dorothy was thirteen years old and after moving to Saint Johnsbury, Vermont, Mary Louise died six years later. At the age of nineteen, Dorothy became fully responsible for her well-being and finances. She supported herself through college and in 1922 received a B.A. in chemistry and zoology from Mont Holyoke College. Andersen went on to attend Johns Hopkins Medical School and received her M.D. in 1926. This is where she performed her research and wrote two papers in the Contributions to Embryology, describing the female reproductive system of a pig.

Once she graduated from Johns Hopkins, Andersen served as a teaching assistant in anatomy at the Rochester School of Medicine. A year later she became an intern for surgery at the Strong Memorial Hospital, in Rochester, New York. After completing her internship year, Andersen was denied a residency in general surgery at the hospital because she was a woman. This drove Dorothy Hansine Andersen to focus on her research instead and in 1929, she began working at Columbia University’s College of Physician and Surgeons as an assistant in pathology. Later, she was asked to join the faculty as an instructor at Columbia Medical School. Joined with Columbia University, Andersen began to work on her doctorate in medical science by studying endocrinology. Specifically, the influences of the endocrine glands on the onset and rate of sexual maturation in rats. By 1935, she received her doctorate from Columbia University and worked as a pathologist at Babies Hospital at the Columbia Presbyterian Medical Center. This is where Andersen remained for the rest of her medical career and eventually became the chief of pathology in 1952. The same year, Dorothy Hansine Andersen was awarded the Elizabeth Blackwell Award.

Research and Career
During her research days, Andersen developed findings in the pathology of celiac disease, noting a distinct fibrosis which causes the malfunction of the pancreas in patients who had died of celiac disease. This was published in the American Journal of Diseases of Children in 1938 and coining the term of the disorder "cystic fibrosis of the pancreas.”  She was awarded the E. Mead Johnson Award for her recognition on this disease. In 1942, Andersen developed the first efficient diagnostic test for cystic fibrosis with Paul di Sant'Agnese (who also worked at Columbia University) at Babies Hospital. In 1948, The American Academy of Pediatrics awarded Andersen the Borden Bronze Plaque for her successful work in “determining the effectiveness of different antibiotics in relieving the respiratory-tract infections that were the main cause of death from cystic fibrosis.” By 1958, Anderson was a full time professor at the Columbia College of Physicians and Surgeons. During this time in her career, Andersen wrote in the Journal of Chronic Diseases that her research findings corresponded to cystic fibrosis being a recessively inherited disease that was once thought to be fatal in early infancy, however now many patients were surviving until early adulthood. It was not until the early 1980s, where researchers could determine the actual cause of cystic fibrosis, being -- a single mutation causing incomplete synthesis of a transmembrane protein, resulting in thick, clogging secretions mainly in the pancreas and respiratory tract.

Towards the end of her career, Andersen developed lung cancer from smoking and underwent surgery in 1962. Dorothy Hansine Andersen died at the age of sixty-one on March 3, 1963 in New York, NY. After her death in 1963, she was honored with the Distinguished Service Medal at the Columbia Presbyterian Medical Center. In remembrance to her work on cystic fibrosis, Dorothy Hansine Andersen was inducted into the National Women’s Hall of Fame in 2002.