User:Mindbody22/Automatic behavior/Friedrice03 Peer Review

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in the spirit possession automatism section dont forget to add that the planchette has a small circle on it that is transparent so the players can see which letter it lands on. Also, for Alien hand syndrome dont forget to mention that it is based on one person and maybe even describe her story. For the dreams section I would also add in all the different stages of sleep and not just REM. Overall you guys did very well i liked how you structured your sentences and entire article.