User:Mindbody22/Automatic behavior/Gremlins874 Peer Review

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 * I think it would be good to expand on the idea of "alien hand syndrome", this concept is highly researched. This concept in my opinion explains best the concept of automatic behaviors, giving examples of what it is could also help readers understand.  To continue, while writing about dreams go more in-depth about nightmares and good dreams.  in the section of ideomotor action theory, add a few sentences about what it explains in the pdf.


 * What you've written so far is very good you just need to expand on certain concepts.