User:Mindbodypedia/Suzanne O'Sullivan/Bodmind Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

This is the peer review of the article about Suzanne O'Sullivan. I think that this article is very well organized and sectioned. Suzanne O'Sullivan's life is divided into smaller sections that are compatible with the development of the article. To improve on this article is to add more text and more information to the draft. Another thing that is crucial to add are the references.


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)