User:Mindbodypedia/Suzanne O'Sullivan/RabiaAkb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

What have they done well?

- Named the books and stated what each one talks about

- Talked about her personal life (but should develop it)

What could they do better?

- Develop a little bit more on her personal life

- Develop the books resume more, they are a little too short

- Maybe they can talk about her journey, how she got where she is now

- Talk about her childhood

- What inspired her