User:MinervaNix/Isocrates/Daboom148 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MinervaNix


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MinervaNix/Isocrates?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Isocrates

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The Lead had been updated to account for new content
 * The Lead does include an introductory sentence
 * The Lead covers most sections of the article
 * Original final sentence is probably fine the way it was before the edits.

Content


 * New title for Family to become Early Life and influences is more descriptive of what is talked about
 * New content is meaningful. Allows reader to know of the other brothers names should they want to know

Tone


 * Tone is neutral

Sources


 * Sources are from a reputable site and book

Organization


 * Content is organized appropriately. Ex: the fact isocrates has brothers is introduced and then their names are given

Images


 * No images added