User:MinervaNix/Numa Pompilius/Berriesblue Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (MinervaNix)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:MinervaNix/Numa Pompilius

Lead
The lead was not changed at all my by my peer.

Content
The content that you added did a really good job of expanding on the existing topic. It can be hard to add content while making sure it still fits into the article, and that the content is relevant and actually adds something to the article. The content you added did this well.

Tone and Balance
Tone is neutral and balanced. I did not notice it swaying to one side or the other. I also found no bias.

Sources and References
The sources you added were reliable, several of them are peer reviewed as well which is great. The sources also are current. The only thing I would suggests is you should attempt to include imbedded links if possible.

Organization

You did not changed the organization of the article at all, which I think was a really good call. The article already reads and flows really well.

Images and Media
No images were added. I would suggest trying to add another pictures of Numa if possible.

Overall impressions
Overall I think the article is in a good place. I do not think it needed much from its original state to make it good. Adding to much to the article would turn it into a essay. I think the grammatical changes you did were perfect they made the article read much more smoother. I think some more grammatical changes could be good. I also think some more media could help the page stand out a little bit more.