User:Mingalls22/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Luke Combs

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Luke Combs because he is my favorite music artist. I have been a fan of his music since around 2019. I attended one of his concerts, Feb. 13, 2020 at Bryce Jordan Center, of the "What You See Is What You Get Tour" (2020–21). It is important because he is very well known singer and I'm sure people look at his page frequently. My preliminary thoughts were pretty good. I did notice however, it could be updated in the "Music" section.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead Section

The lead section looks very good to me overall. It is concise and only provides information that will later be discussed. Introduction sentence sounds perfect.

Content

There are definitely some songs that could be added to the "Music" section. His "Personal Life" section could use some more information. All current content is relevant and up-to-date.

Tone and Balance

Tone and balance seems good throughout. No one is leaning one way or another about how they feel about Luke. It is all facts with little to no opinion.

Sources and References

Links seem to be working to different Wikipedia sites and to external sources. Information appears well-cited and referenced adequately. A lot of news articles are cited, which I feel is appropriate given the fact that he is a public figure. Articles are up-to-date.

Organization and writing quality

The article is organized well and has good quality. I do not see any spelling or grammatical errors. It is broken down in to very good main points. One change I would consider making is moving the "Personal Life" section above the "Music" section.

Images and Media

There is only one image in the article. It is well captioned and follows the copyright guidelines. I do believe there could be more images, such as his wife or of a concert.

Talk page discussion

There is not a lot going on in the talk page. All discussions are outdated. But, there was some people answering and giving advice so that was good to see. It is a part of two WikiProjects: "Biography" and "Country Music." It is rated C-Class and mid-importance.

Overall impressions

The article is up-to-date and has little to no errors, spelling and grammar wise. It could use some more development in the "Personal Life" and "Music" sections. It is pretty well written overall and would not be hard to make it even better.