User:Mingyili009/Autistic masking/!777francis777! Peer Review

General info
Mingyili009
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mingyili009/Autistic_masking?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead seems to be taking a stance on the issue instead of just providing facts. It sounds more like the introduction to a persuasive essay instead of a Wikipedia article. The rest of the article just includes a bunch of sentences that don't necessary seem to connect with each other. I can see that this is a work in progress, so those are the only things I have to say in terms of an evaluation.