User:Mingyili009/Autistic masking/Jlk004 Peer Review

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Mingyili009
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 * User:Mingyili009/Autistic masking:
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 * Autistic masking

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead: The addition seems to be about masking in general, which is already linked in the first line. It's nice that it adds context, but it may not be necessary,

Body: The sources are very interesting, recent, and all seem credible according to the citations. The edits are not completely fleshed out, but adding these resources would add to the masking research section nicely. It is hard to gauge conciseness and organization when the additions are not written out. The content added and sources used does seem to be neutral in tone, fit for adding to Wikipedia.