User:MingzeGaojmart460/Karaim language/Maradeleonm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MingzeGaojmart460, i see that this person added the dialectology part of the article.



Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the content added, I believe is very important and relevant for any language and there's never too enough information about a language specially when we are contributing to what information is accesible to others. The edits remain neutral, there is no opinion or side. I do think the added content improved the overall quality of the article and paints a better and more detail picture of the language.

My only suggestion would be to review the language, I think it can be a little wordy sentences like " Even so it is important to point out" "prefer to choose" "partly due to the fact that ". I think it could be more concise or clear to read and that would be beneficial for a wikipedia article. Other than that I think it was great!