User:MingzeGaojmart460/Karaim language/Nataliawrobel3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

IntrepidError, Sduran2, Ak24000, Frenchsilkpie, MingzeGaojmart460


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MingzeGaojmart460/Karaim_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Karaim language

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is very well organized, unbiased, and informational. Additionally, the information is organized in a manner that is not confusing and flows well with the information presented. The only suggestion I have is to include more citations for the information you present, especially because it is better to be safe with as many citations as possible. Some of the ways that the information is presented within the paragraphs are wordy, so I would recommend shortening the sentences to contain only important information. Overall, there are a lot of citations that need to be added and shorten the sentences to avoid wordiness.