User:Minhokorea/Mirocaris/Annavc3 Peer Review

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Anna Cleary Peer Review of Adaptations - Chemo and Thermal

Food Detection Section

Your discussion on the antennae and antennule structures was clear and utilized your source well. The first two sentences of this section were somewhat unclear. I think that they could both be restructured to better explain what is meant by "opportunistic feeders" and "secondary consumers". Though only one source covered this topic, it seems to have adequately covered how M. fortunata detect food in their dark habitats.

Thermal Adaptations Section

I think the first two sentences of this section could be combined to more clearly explain the link between increased oxygen consumption, biochemical reaction rates, and temperature increases. Again, only one source covered this topic but the information is summarized well. The summary of how M. fortunata's ability to withstand temperature fluctuations makes it clear to the reader how this benefit's the species in its specific environment.