User:Mini.licc/Gary Hamel/Okrowe Peer Review

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Mini.licc
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Hello! All of the links in your sandbox look great! Then looking at the article, it translated very well! If there was anything you could find about his personal life to add, I think that would make for good additions. You balance the tone and neutrality well while also allowing Hamel's accomplishments to shine. For you bibliography, was there any additional sources that you cited? Overall, I think this is pretty great work!