User:Minioger

I Was born 1990, while currently still alive in 2018. mostly living in Arlington Washing my whole life. While spending a few years in Alabama, to shortly return to Washington. I'm a twin not many people know this, but it is true. "Minioger" comes from my Father, a 6 foot 8, 350lb man. Growing up all my life my father has had the nickname Oger. Therefore, I was given the nick name Minioger, being his son. I'm enrolled in college as a student at Everett Community college. Studying for a future career in computer science. playing guitar is a big passion of mine. Started 12 years ago now back when my parents played in a garage band. I used to play live events with them. While still to this day learning new things. I'm a gamer, I always challenge myself to get better but I'm nowhere near professional level. I would say that it’s probably a big reason of my interest in computer science.

Article Critique
I visited The Screaming_(music) page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: I've noticed subjects are left out, Citations are minimal and some sections irrelevant. As I began reading the article, I felt that the Article never really did describe what it exactly was. While there are only two headers one that is decently large, describing genre. While the other covering health risks, which is very small. Even the lead section is basically empty. Personally, I would add more info I the lead section pertaining to more of the different headings and describe that it’s a type of singing that applies to a genre of music. Starting a new section containing culture, this would allow it to describe the upbringing of screaming into lyrics. This could help pull some of the info that is in other sub-headings to a separate heading. Other headers ideas could consist of History, When the first recoded screaming lyrics were put into use. Searching through the sources I see only four of the links are working. Oldest ones just seem to be from articles nearly 30 years back, not able to provide verification. Regardless some of the sources do come from reputable establishments. I feel that some of the sources should be updated with more current articles, or ones that are more easily accessible. Sourcing different artists who perform these vocals from YouTube then people could hear what it sounds like. In the beginning of the genre section it talks about opera or performance plays in the late 1800s early 1900s. This feels very irrelevant to the subject, at which is describing a style of musical lyrics used today. Removing a part of the sub-headings content and moving the rest more relevant information to a history section. Making the article easier to help narrow which kinds of question people may have.