User:Minu1208/Christian feminism/Niese05 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Minu1208


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Minu1208/Christian feminism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Christian feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Minu1208

Here is my peer review:

Lead


 * No the lead has no been updated to reflect the new content added.
 * No the Lead does not include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * No the lead does not include a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * No the Lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * There is no lead.

Content


 * No content was added to the article.

Tone and Balance


 * Editor has not made any changes.

Sources


 * No sources were listed for this article.

Organization


 * No content is written by the editor

Images and Media


 * No images or media was added additionally.

Additional Feedback: I'm sure once you start editing the article will come together smoothly. I wish you luck in your edits and I hope we'll get to see them soon! Niese05 (talk) 04:18, 24 October 2022 (UTC)