User:Miosaurus/Kari Barba/Deerinara Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Miosaurus) Kari Barba


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Miosaurus/Kari_Barba?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is definitely information that is still missing. I think that the last paragraph should be under another heading, not on the lead. References haven’t been cited yet.