User:Miraydwerri/Sancaklar Mosque/Yacineghedas Peer Review

The Wikipedia article on Sancaklar Mosque is informative, but it can be enhanced to meet Wikipedia's standards for accuracy, neutrality, and verifiability.

Firstly, the article's structure could be clearer, particularly in distinguishing between sections like 'Interior Architecture' and 'Exterior Architecture.' Adding subheadings for major design elements would improve organization and readability.

While the article references awards and recognition, such as the 2015 Religious Building of the Year Award from ArchDaily and praise from the BBC series 'Civilisations,' it should ensure that each claim is supported by appropriate citations. For example, statements about the mosque's design philosophy need direct references to maintain verifiability.

The article's language sometimes leans towards being promotional, especially when discussing the emotional aspects of the mosque's design. Terms like "dramatic and awe-inspiring" should be attributed directly to cited sources to maintain neutrality.

Although the article covers the mosque's innovative design and cultural significance, it could benefit from discussing any criticisms or challenges faced during its construction. This would provide a more balanced view and enhance credibility.

Additionally, integrating multimedia elements such as images of the mosque's unique features would enrich the article and provide a better understanding for readers. Ensuring that these images are properly licensed and sourced is essential.

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