User:MishaC22/Evaluate an Article

= Which article are you evaluating? = Hawaiian monk seal

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I really enjoy learning about the Hawaiian monk seal. This article matters because it gives information about the Hawaiian monk seal and how itʻs endangered which is important for people who are visiting the islands to know. My preliminary impression of this article was that it has a lot of information and seems informative.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * The lead is a little short but provides pretty good information
 * One thing that could be added is maybe what the punishment for harming or killing a Hawaiian monk seal would be
 * I like how the author added in the diet and habitat of a Hawaiian monk seal
 * Another thing to add in is maybe the problems the government has with tourists getting to close to a monk seal and how important being educated about Hawaiian monk seals before visiting the islands is
 * The author is good with using a neutral tone
 * The article has a C-class rating
 * This article within the WikiProject Mammals