User:Mishagator/Louisa Picquet/JanellePuckering Peer Review

The intro sentence is a little awkward. Maybe try: "Louisa Picquet (c. 1829, Columbia, South Carolina – August 11, 1896, New Richmond, Ohio) was an African American born in slavery. Her narrative Louisa Picquet, Octoroon was published in 1861."

The lead could be expanded upon to include her buying her mother out of slavery and a brief overview of the sections. The content you added was relevant. Great work!

In the Slave Narrative section, it would be nice to include details about how involved Picquet was in creating the narrative. Hiram Mattison wrote it, but do we know anything about their collaboration process?

Good job on deleting uncited information.

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