User:Miso Raven/Alex Donis/Cboka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Miso Raven


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Miso%20Raven/Alex_Donis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article looks great so far! I can tell that you're still filling it out but I hope my feedback helps somewhat!

Constructive criticism:


 * I like what you've put for your leading statement, I think it could benefit from a little more information if you can find it. You could include that they are American, maybe their queer or cultural identities, etc.
 * Consider fleshing out each entry under Notable works with descriptions such as medium, subject, artistic motivation.
 * Consider adding some links in keywords within your article. Wikipedia has a function for when you click the link icon in the toolbar at the top of your screen it will automatically search for internal Wikipedia articles to match. For example, your artist went to CSULB, so you could highlight that and add a link to the Wikipedia entry for CSULB.
 * Your references look solid, and it seems like you just need one more to meet the requirements (I believe).

It looks great though! Your artist seems cool. :-)

I have been looking at this Wiki entry for inspiration: Chella Man. It's given me a lot of direction for my edits.