User:Misplacedkey/Water turbine/Rdery Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Misplacedkey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Misplacedkey/Water_turbine?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water turbine

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The edits made seem highly relevant to the page. The content added is well written and clear. It is good to add to the early history of the water turbine so that readers can have some context. The citations are good and relevant to the information you added. You may want to add a brief mention of what you added in the lead section of the page if there is none already. There are a few misspelled words in what you added. The image you added is helpful for showing what older water turbines looked like.