User:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans/Hailey959 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Miss. Anieya)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think It is really good how you organized and provided structural information. I like how you included things about what people would want to know. I really enjoyed how you included information about tours and I really enjoyed the image you used. However it would have been great to get information on who hosts the tours and how to go on one you self. Also I think you should add more pictures of the scenic areas you were describing as readers might want to get a visual along with your description. The last section titled "More Information" could use more information, because it ended abruptly. Other than that I think that you have good a draft but just fluff out the article just a little bit more so the reader can gain more information.