User:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans/Inspiration 2.0 Peer Review

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 * Username: Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans
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 * 8th Ward of New Orleans  (Existing article link)
 * 8th Ward of New Orleans  (Existing article link)

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The lead section of the article is good. The only thing I have to say about this section is how the last sentence is worded. When I am reading it out loud it just sounds kind of off, like the part that says "The 8th Ward has a line straight north into the lake". Maybe you could change it to "The 8th Ward has a straight line that runs north into Lake (and right here after Lake, you could say what lake it is), which is actually part of the University of New Orleans' Campus." For the section that says More Information, it needs more information in this section. Maybe you could add like fun facts that nobody knows about The 8th Ward or anything that you can find dealing with your topic. In addition, the tour section, I know you talked about the churches, but if you can talk about more things that you can do in The 8th Ward other than explore churches. Also, all the sources are good and they work. Other than all that, I think your article is good so far.