User:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans/Laeh101 Peer Review

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Miss.Anieya


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 * User:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans


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Anieya this article is very well written and I am excited to see where it goes. The history is detailed and is focused. All of your content is relevant to the 8th Ward. I know this is just a draft but make sure that you expand on all of the information and add more content for each subject. The 8th Ward is a very large subject and there will be a lot to cover and a lot of resources to use, to the point where it could be overwhelming but this is an amazing start. The lead is good and has a lot of the ground information but it could be a little more in depth. The opening sentence is really strong and perfectly displays what the article will be about. The tone of your article remained neutral which is really good, but make sure you the amount of information you cover is balanced. All of your sources look great and they are all up to date. I believe you accidentally cited one of your sources twice. I like that you added an image but maybe a couple more images of the 8th Ward in its entirety maybe useful, such as a map. Overall I think your are doing a great job on your article, but just make sure to expand your content!