User:MissSt.Bernard/Animal welfare/Cedarwaxwing25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MissSt.Bernard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MissSt.Bernard/Animal_welfare?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Animal welfare

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I understand the purpose of this section, however I think its wording is a bit confusing. The quotes are beneficial to the topic, but they should be included along with other information. Bulking up this section with information from other citations would support these quotes and enhance the article.

- The lead of this article is very well written. It gives a nice overview of the article topic and introduces some of the sections that will be addressed later.

- There are many good citations in this article; however, the section you are editing does not have any citations.

- This article is well organized and not excessive in its sub sections.