User:Mistercoffee71/Capital punishment/User78632 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Mistercoffee71


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mistercoffee71/Capital punishment
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Capital punishment

Evaluate the drafted changes
The inquisitive section title seems unnecessary, I would leave it as simply "Moratoriums." The first paragraph introducing the topic could be a lot more concise. The length and structure of both sentences make it difficult to read and understand.

Make sure you are citing any information that is not entirely your own.

Avoid "good"

The heading used for the second paragraph could be more concise.

"Massive case" wording like this is not the most objective, try to maintain a neutral disinterested tone.

"pretty heinous" is not very objective.

"Solely based on this definition alone" - the use of both "solely" and "alone" in this sentence is redundant, stick to one or the other.

Try to find more sources for your article if you haven't already.

You have some grammatical errors, make sure to proofread your work.