User:Misty Vistas/Lynne M. Angerer/Dylandubay1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Misty Vistas)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Misty%20Vistas/Lynne_M._Angerer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a really great start to this Wikipedia page. I really like how in-depth you went into their research. I think in addition, you should include information about their awards, current work, and how people have utilized her work in their research! I think finding and citing some of their professional work would be a good addition to this page. So far, the formatting is good, but still needs more bodies of writing for a wiki page. There were also some parts of the writing that have extra spaces between words, so that is something that should be fixed. Overall, good job!