User:Misty Vistas/Lynne M. Angerer/Mitra002 Peer Review

General info

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Information is well written and relevant. There are a few minor typos or dropped spaces. I would recommend reading through the article once aloud to catch these.

One thing of note: Sometimes Dr. Angerer is referred to as Mrs. or Ms. Angerer. These should be changed, because she has a PHD and this article is specifically about her research and work in the field. But overall it looks great!

keep working!! :)