User:Misty Vistas/Lynne M. Angerer/Un Bear able2012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Misty Vistas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Misty%20Vistas/Lynne_M._Angerer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Make sure you proofread because there are a few locations where there are unnecessary spaces and others where there are missing spaces, you also need to make sure you type titles properly (PhD not PHD and Dr. not Mrs. or Ms.). There needs to be a lot more consistency. Can you find any additional info on her education? Has she won any awards?