User:Mistymitz/Mexican hip hop/Bill hater Peer Review

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User:Mistymitz
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 * User:Mistymitz/Mexican hip hop
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Not under the specific lead section; edited lead section adds detail to the article's current information and includes related and accurate sources.

"performed by Mexican artists and/ or artists of Mexican descent" and/or could be phrased better.

"Chicano Rap" Wikipedia page should be linked in the article.

Lead is concise and features a brief synopsis of the content of the article.

Content

The content of the article contains functional and credible source links. It addresses Wikipedia content gaps and is from an article that is very out of date.

Tone

The article has a neutral tone

Sources

The sources are accurate and current, and are from reputable sources.

Image

The image is relevant, visually appealing, and captured well. The user did not add the image to Wikipedia themselves, so legitimacy can't be determined but is assumed.

Overall

The added section is overall very beneficial, adding much-needed context and content to an otherwise fairly empty article. The sandbox draft itself could be better articulated, and could link to more articles for further reading.

For example, " In the context of Mexico," is a bit of awkward phrasing; consider: "The hip-hop movement reached Mexico around the 1990s with the emergence of the group Control Machete"

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