User:Mitchelljasin/Birch beer/Aby25duh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mitchelljasin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchelljasin/Birch_beer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchelljasin/Birch_beer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Elaborate more upon the origins of birch beer. The entry is very brief and informational with a picture that gives an example of a brand of birch beer. Overall, very good article and it is very brief. Adding more information and elaborating upon the origins of birth beer and the oldest recipes found would be a great contribution.