User:Mitchelljasin/Birch beer/Kahmilmo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mitchelljasin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mitchelljasin/Birch beer - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Mitchelljasin/Birch beer - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, this article was a great choice since there is not much information on it. When reading what you added it doesn't come off as opinion based. You give us neutral content and I find what you added to be useful. I see that you added "Ingredients" this was an informational thing to add since the original article didn't include specifically all the ingredients. You could also add how the ingredients impact the flavor. For example, does the vanilla make it taste like cream soda? What is the significance of the ingredients in producing the distinct flavor. What is the science behind the yeast in the soda?