User:Mitchelljasin/Birch beer/Wub916 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mitchelljasin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchelljasin/Birch_beer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Birch beer

Evaluate the drafted changes
this draft has clear structure and balanced content assigned to each section. Also, the words used to describe the topic is neutral and understandable. even if there are some technical words in the text, the student explain it with links, so readers won't have much trouble understanding it.

the dark side of this draft is that the lead part is missing ,so reader can not get a full summary about the content.